rough sketch

[leelastarsky]

Sketched this for my own fic yesterday, when telstra (who just happens to be Australia's BIGGEST internet provider) was down for several hours. *kicks telstra*

Not sure if it's worth finishing...  I have issues with Hermione's hand, but it was surprisingly difficult to get her finger looking right without it looking like she was sticking it up his nose!  *smirks*

 

http://img58.photobucket.com/albums/v176/leelastarsky/Harry%20Potter/sundaymorningrough2.jpg

Comments

[myf.livejournal.com]

I like it.

*kicks Telstra*

Would it be easier if Hermione's fingers weren't vertical, and near his nose? She could be running her index finger along his jaw or chin, with her hand curled and the back of her hand uppermost. (Make sense?) There's a lot of detail and lines around his mouth and nose, it gets a bit hard to decipher.

I loove the facial detail, though - fantastic

[leelastarsky.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Myf. Think I might go back and redraw/reposition her hand completely. Sometimes I need a break of a few days to see it afresh and be able to figure out what changes are needed. :~)

[sparrohawk.livejournal.com]

This is beautiful! Found it via scribbulus_ink. I love their facial expressions, and love the whole feel of the drawing.

Very nice work!

[leelastarsky.livejournal.com]

Thankyou! :~)