I love your take on the characters! I was touched that even so ill and in so much distress Han was concerned about Leia feeling humiliated in her slave girl getup.
Han's rescue has always bothered me -- forget that the action sequences are, ah, somewhat less than successful, it just seems unlikely that Han could recover so quickly from being frozen. I like the strategy you adopt in your stories of proceding from the assumption that everything takes longer than it seems. It works: such successful re-imaginings!
I can't wait for more. Thank you!
(one problem, I can't get the file titled "chapter 2" to open -- what am I doing wrong?
(and I hope you don't mind my "friend"ing you unasked -- I want to keep up with your work!).
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Thank you for the update!
Date: 2004-11-05 10:47 am (UTC)Han's rescue has always bothered me -- forget that the action sequences are, ah, somewhat less than successful, it just seems unlikely that Han could recover so quickly from being frozen. I like the strategy you adopt in your stories of proceding from the assumption that everything takes longer than it seems. It works: such successful re-imaginings!
I can't wait for more. Thank you!
(one problem, I can't get the file titled "chapter 2" to open -- what am I doing wrong?
(and I hope you don't mind my "friend"ing you unasked -- I want to keep up with your work!).
All best, Eliz.