looking for constructive crit.

[leelastarsky]

Particularly from ivylore  or anyone else who has had the good fortune to see an aurora.

Are the colours too 'pretty'?  The theme of the book is that everything (particularly polar bears) are all the same colour, so the aurora is supposed to stand out.

Anyway, I'd like to hear your opinions.  :~) 

(cross posting to artbeta so I'm sorry if you get this twice)

Comments

It's lovely!

[ivylore.livejournal.com]

I think it's beautiful, Leela! Not "too pretty" at all. The auroras are incredibly varied (ranging from the mundane to the spectacular). And that's the exact shade of green I always see.

It's funny - we've had a huge Coca Cola Campaign running up here during the winters which depicts a mother polar bear resting with her cubs (drinking Coca Cola, of course) and looking up at the Northern night sky. This drawing totally taps into Canadian pop (no pun intended) culture for me.

Re: It's lovely!

[leelastarsky.livejournal.com]

Ooo, I'm sure we had those ads here. They were all CGI? Very cute.

I've updated the pic; tell me what you think. :~)