looking for constructive crit.

[leelastarsky]

Particularly from ivylore  or anyone else who has had the good fortune to see an aurora.

Are the colours too 'pretty'?  The theme of the book is that everything (particularly polar bears) are all the same colour, so the aurora is supposed to stand out.

Anyway, I'd like to hear your opinions.  :~) 

(cross posting to artbeta so I'm sorry if you get this twice)

Comments

[suehypno.livejournal.com]

What a fantastic piece! It makes me homesick for my home in Wisconsin! We don't get them down in Virginia and so it's been a few years since I've seen one, but the colors are spot-on. Maybe just a hint more white--even though it's night, the snow would reflect some light as well. Please keep us informed when that book comes out--I've love to buy it.

[leelastarsky.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Sue. Check out the update in the next post. :~) I've softened it a bit.