is this better?

[leelastarsky]

Here's an updated version.  I've lightened and softened off the aurora.  Looks more natural now I think.  :~)

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[merkuria-lyn.livejournal.com]

Just found this (strange how I sometimes seem to miss posts, despite my obsessive checking of the flist...). What a lovely picture! You say it's for a children's book?

[leelastarsky.livejournal.com]

Yep. Hopefully. ;~)