is this better?

[leelastarsky]

Here's an updated version.  I've lightened and softened off the aurora.  Looks more natural now I think.  :~)

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[leelastarsky.livejournal.com]

Well the author I'm doing these illustrations for is in the US. But she doesn't have a publisher yet, so I'm not sure whether it will go ahead. Fingers crossed, eh? :~)